Comic Assignment - Page02

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school assignment, i had to make comic/graphic novel about Indonesian ghost... And mine here mostly tells about the origin of Nyi Roro Kidul, the mystical queen who haunted the southern sea of Java....
Well, there are actually a lot of folklores about her, but i like to consider my story as an alternative,,,, a modern version of how she becomes Nyi Roro Kidul....

Done in 0.1 & 0.3 drawing pen and watercolor in concorde paper. I tried to use multiple harsh strokes and messy coloring style to emphasize the main character's emotion (read, and you'll know about her).

Btw I never made comic more than 2-3 pages before, so... Constructive criticsm are welcomed...